Monday, December 8, 2025

Two Prompts, Two Poems


Like a parlor trick, I can produce poetry on demand. Not good poetry, mind you -- but something approaching poetic structure.

This weekend, I attended a workshop by a real poet, Dante Di Stefano, sponsored by the Poetry Center at Passaic County Community College (that's a lot of Ps and Cs!).

The first prompt: write a "cover version" of a well-known song, movie, TV show, poem... etc. Something that imitates, references or pays homage to the original. I thought of the times I read my daughters to sleep reciting poetry, and wrote this:

Annabel Lee


It was many and many a year ago,

When I used to read you to sleep


You never understood

The meaning of the words

But the words had meaning to me


The words had meaning to me

As I watched you drift into sleep


And I dreamed of your dreams

And our time seemed to flee,

Seemed to flee

As I read you to sleep


Now years seem to flee

As I think of you here,

Near this empty bed,

Where you no longer sleep


So far from me now,

So far from our dreams,

Entombed by the memories I keep.


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The second prompt: Write something titled "Self Portrait As a XXX"

I considered my trusty "Starry Night" notebook and lucky St. Patrick's Cathedral pen, and decided to write something inspired by Van Gogh's famous self-portrait, with his left ear bandaged. I symbolically cut off the left portion of my keyboard and wrote something that didn't use the letters q, w, a, s, z, x or the number s 1 or 2:

Self Portrait as a Poet


Help me!

Help my poem!

Help it live!


Yet…


I found your letter.

I found hope in my reply.

Think of me.


I think of you too.

I love your poetry.

You found me differently.